Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Reason, Nov 30, 2001.
dis piece was hummmmmm!! koooool!
maybe ya can name it
(A BLAST OF LUSTFUL MINDED LOVE)
At this time a title escapes me
I can say that it is....
maybe let the reader entitle it
to their own interpretation of blissful fantasy..
I did....so explicitly, romantically, surperbly done..
Once my mind settles down from the mental rush your poem administered, I might be able to come up with something.
I agree with Epip, but your work always has those wonderful elements. You are so **** badd at what you do good.....
Madd Holiday Greetings
Rich - I cant thank you enough for continually checkin fa me dog!
Epiphany~ Dear it's okay if you cant suggest a title... your suggestion of letting the reader title it is kinda kool. Thank you for diggin whut I do.
Coco~ Ma I hope this served as a sufficient fix for now...lol Cant have you goin to anutha pusher...lol
Thank yall fa taking the time to read me. I only hope to be able to continually leave you satisfied.
We made Love by the Moonrise
Under a transparent sky
We saw the starz
Shimmer inside the sunset
We made Love in Tears
Of joy and pain Conjuncted
We made Love
In a Paralyzed Paradise
Time stood still as you
I must agree with sista Epiphany...this piece feels so very personal...and I can't even explain what it means to me...
It's my priviledge to have you read me! Please know that you inspire...
Thanks for da love ma
no title necessary
I am in agreement with others....no title needed
I've read this over and over, and I seem to not be able to give the reponse that I'd like....
but....this is a nice, soft read...
enjoying your work....
I await your next scribes
alwayz got ya back
dat's what dawgs be for ya know!!
The shades of my love or the strength of my love... This well done!
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