Black Poetry : Untitled

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  1. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hey reason!

    dis piece was hummmmmm!! koooool!

    maybe ya can name it

    (A BLAST OF LUSTFUL MINDED LOVE):toast:
     
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    Wow Reas...

    At this time a title escapes me
    I can say that it is....
    ....beautiful
    .....sensual
    .....romantic
    .......erotic
    .....lustful
    maybe let the reader entitle it
    to their own interpretation of blissful fantasy..


    I did....so explicitly, romantically, surperbly done..:toast:


    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    Reas,

    Once my mind settles down from the mental rush your poem administered, I might be able to come up with something.

    I agree with Epip, but your work always has those wonderful elements. You are so **** badd at what you do good.....


    Madd Holiday Greetings :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich - I cant thank you enough for continually checkin fa me dog!

    Epiphany~ Dear it's okay if you cant suggest a title... your suggestion of letting the reader title it is kinda kool. Thank you for diggin whut I do.

    Coco~ Ma I hope this served as a sufficient fix for now...lol Cant have you goin to anutha pusher...lol

    Thank yall fa taking the time to read me. I only hope to be able to continually leave you satisfied.

    Yall Know
    Reas
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brotha Reason

    awesome imagery!!!!!

    We made Love by the Moonrise
    Under a transparent sky
    We saw the starz
    Shimmer inside the sunset


    ..and


    We made Love in Tears
    Of joy and pain Conjuncted
    Passion un~fathomed


    ...and

    We made Love
    In a Paralyzed Paradise
    Time stood still as you
    MoVeD me…


    I must agree with sista Epiphany...this piece feels so very personal...and I can't even explain what it means to me...

    thank you!

    a
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce

    It's my priviledge to have you read me! Please know that you inspire...

    Thanks for da love ma
    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    no title necessary

    Reas,

    I am in agreement with others....no title needed

    I've read this over and over, and I seem to not be able to give the reponse that I'd like....

    but....this is a nice, soft read...

    enjoying your work....

    I await your next scribes

    Blk Kween
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    alwayz got ya back

    dat's what dawgs be for ya know!!:D
     
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    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    how about

    The shades of my love or the strength of my love... This well done!
     
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