Black Poetry : untitled

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  1. BallOfConfusion

    BallOfConfusion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you've got me wrap'd around your finger
    & i dont know how to get loose
    no actually i dont wanna get loose
    i love the way you hold me
    i love it when you hit me
    not hit me in a way of pain
    but the way children play fight when they really wanna say i like u
    love taps...yea i like that
    i'd love for you to be my protector
    i love it when i see you
    even if for a moment
    or one of those times i'm being ignored
    i still love it
    you are my addiction i cant get over
    you got me wrap'd around your finger
    & i cant get loose
    no actually baby keep wrappin
    cus i wanna stay close to you
    even if it means me bein used
    i'll still love you
    i dont know why
    but what i feel for you is true
    the more i push the harder u pull away
    when i give up thats when u wanna play
    i'm a grown women i dont have time for this bull****
    so i say
    if you like me then show me like a man shood do
    i'll play along for a while but pretty soon i'll be thru
    so i say
    but your right back over do the same thing
    over
    & over
    & i say it's over
    but i dont mean
    i dont know why but i cant stay mad at you
    you are my world and i am your...
    well i dont know wat i am to u
    sometimes u call me ur boo - & i eat that **** up with a spoon
    sometimes i'm ur bestfriend
    & sometimes i'm just that girl
    that girl that sometimes i kiss
    or dismiss
    you got me wrap'd around your finger
    & i cant get loose
    no actually baby keep wrappin
    cus i wanna stay close to you
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There are many shades that color a relationship, and many reasons for the way we may feel, be they right or wrong. Many layers to this piece.
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wonderful flow of how love has and can get a hold on you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet embrace ....love is
     
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