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  1. 4g0tt3n_Canc3r

    4g0tt3n_Canc3r Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Words...

    They keep me sane and flow through my vains
    allowing my soul to leak on the page
    like the blood of a fallen hood hero
    years of pain what we are still here though

    now....

    i swear with conviction that people will listen
    to what i say because now and today
    my thoughts my feelins my words my visions
    cannot be contained in their pinnacle prison

    my thoughts my feelins my words my visions
    will resound in your ears because im on a mission
    to educate those who are ignorant to the fact
    that this world is not always just white and black

    that people are dying and children are crying
    and noone gives a **** so they stop trying
    and once they give up on their future thats it

    But who cares.... not you..
    cause to you... we are just another

    statistic
     
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    Spead the word:teach: , it carries a lot of weight, I like ya drop poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to da house of peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless this some love

    very nicely done i look to read more of you soon
    and see u showing love as love is given again welcome
     
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    you have so much power behind your words. flo on poet!
     
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    Yours are words that make the reader pay attention. Such strength in those words penned.
     
  6. 4g0tt3n_Canc3r

    4g0tt3n_Canc3r Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks a bunches all
     
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