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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The boy who was a figmant of my imaginary memory,
    A whisp of girlish dreams never manifested in reality
    hopes of a time long past with wind blown
    sands of time taking away a childhood
    feeling and replacing with a womans
    heart and fleeting feeling of lovelust
    confusion. Awaken in a reality
    of lonley nearnest.
    Listen as the wind defines
    the culmation of all these feelings
    in one word.
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    very beautiful...very poetic...I followed the growth of that young girl...brilliant write.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaa! this was released in it's finest
    tyte scribe
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$R$$ ya know I am always happy to have your feedback thank you so much .
    Abstract again thanks for the love..
     
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    yes my sista im feelin yo flo
    so much emotions can be expressed in one word
    nice drop


    blackluv and bp
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankya thankya always appreciate the feedback, especially from one of the poets I admire.
     
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