Black Poetry : Untitled.....

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  1. Versatile

    Versatile Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Patience is a virtue they all say
    Then why is it I can’t wait to see you
    Its like my mind keeps on running in all directions
    I crave to be with you
    In the physical that is
    Feelings are evoked from a familiar place
    Sensations arise from a threshold so deep within my fruit
    It’s almost as if I can feel you inside me
    My panties moistening at the thought
    Oops I forgot there’s no need for such things when I am in your presence
    All these intangible fantasies that are beyond the senses
    God I want to feel and touch you
    Caress you ever so gently
    Expressing my femininity towards you
    Hot oil massages on your delicate skin
    My soft hands rubbing your defined back
    What a spectacle to behold
    Your masculinity…mmmm
    The sculpture of my man
    The sculpture of you
    Fingertips against your broad shoulders
    I am afraid to touch you
    Such acts might cause my orgasmic muscle to explode
    S### why not
    As long as they’re shudders caused by you
    And you alone
    **** my thighs are trembling legs are weakening
    Heaven must be at my reach
    But I’m not ready
    You see,
    You have yet to enter my vaginal cocoon
    With your male principle
    Lights dimmed just right
    Your pupils dilating at the sight of my nakedness
    What a sight to behold…
    Your skin against mine
    Touching….mmmm
    Can we get any closer than this
    My nipples are erect against your chest
    Your male principle hard against my thighs and yours
    Heartfelt stares and a passionate kiss
    I’m enveloped in you
    In the presence of you
    In the presence of us
    Entwined this way
    My back is against your warmth
    Your holding me with no thoughts of letting go
    And finally I climax
    At the pleasures of you giving me intimacy…………….
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow very passionate write love the flo you've created flow on poet.:kiss1:
     
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    Quite a sensual vibe here, bringing your readers right into the moment. Good to read you again Versatile.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was lovely and romantic hot and sweet
    whewwwwww! got it going on !!!!
     
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    Versatile Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thankx everybody for the compliments...
     
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    Man I speechless
    This is so sexy
    It just drips from the page
    Very sensual poet
     
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    Versatile Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey....thankx tantrum i always liked your work....
     
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    :kiss1: Hottttttttt! wonderful drop poet:kiss1:
     
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