Black Haiku : Untitled

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  1. We

    We Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awoke this morning
    Convo still heavy on mind
    I said some mean things



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    Harsh words uttered in
    haste, next time I'll take time to
    think before I speak
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    trapment of my words
    nasty and raw to them hearts
    now laying in it
     
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    The world on my shoulders
    Death at my feet
    Life is struggle
    Im still feeling it
     
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    Always remember, in any giving day,
    that "Mouth" don't care, what it say
    ~do say something...to brighten my day~​
     
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    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Look in the mirror
    and stare for a while...
    maybe then you'll
    have a reason to smile.
     
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    This has happen to me before...
    Feelin' ya scribe, L

    Peace!
     
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    Loose as a noose flip
    of the tongue like double edge
    the sword become deep
     
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    Yeah, your words, cut like a razor,
    stabs like a blade
    the reason why...I'm left in a daze​
     
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