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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soblessed, Sep 25, 2005.

  1. soblessed

    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Battle

    The battle between good and evil, life and death.
    My flesh pulling me in one direction, my spirit in another.
    The enemy trying to steal my joy, my soul.
    Trying to make it back to my Father.
    Trying to be a worthy and loyal soldier.
    Fierce shots made to mind, blows made to my heart.
    Attacks to my flesh.
    Wounded and and my spirit weary.
    Almost to knees.
    Ready to throw my hands up in defeat.
    An angelic warrior whispers to me.
    Push through it, push your way through.
    Courage to now go on, regaining my strength.
    Now wearing the Lord's armour, ready to fight in the war.
    Marching through the storm, singing through the fire.
    My friends lost in the destruction.
    Loved ones to injured to go on.
    Soldiers in distress
    The enemy still trying to slay me.
    Marching still, victory so close.
    Freedom!
    More free with each step I take.
    The adversary confused, no more weapons to use.
    The enemy defeated
    Conquering the obstacles
    Resisting evil
    Standing against the enemy
    Marching through the pain
    Letting go and letting God
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word let God be all the force......

    peace within tyte drop......
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such determination in your words, and so descript, I felt as though I was in the mist of battle. Wonderful, inspiring work poet.
     
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    thank you for your comments.
     
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    A very Uplifting work you can never go wrong with that last line, "letting go and letting God." Gone & Preach It
     
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    Sister warrior! You've captured the struggle of good and evil so well. Got me over here shouting give me some of What Soblessed has.

    Give me the strength father, to fight another day!

    Very inspiring piece! Loved it!
     
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    hi soblessed
    you are a worthy soldiers
    your drop is filled with a firing power
    that shows direction and planning
    i am just over come by the strenght
    within your drop
    and that is what makes it so good ..wow..
    much love poet
    Feeling your drop
    Let it flow

    Peace
     
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    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tha-Emissary,Purplemoon and Bluewater thank you for your kind words
     
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    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I got some angelic warriors whisper to me here at Destee. You know who you are. Thanks
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Most welcome sistah
     
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