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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soblessed, Sep 25, 2005.

  1. soblessed

    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I thought about you today, like I do everyday.
    Today my heart cried for you like it does everyday.
    Angry that you are not here with me.
    Angry that the people who could of helped us did nothing.
    Today my heart cried for you .
    It cried a loud a cry.
    My heart breaks for you.
    My heart breaks because I cannot see you nor hold you.
    My heart crys every night I cannot kiss goodnight.
    It crys in the morning when I cannot see you when you awake.
    It crys because I have not heard your sweet little voice.
    The cute way you say your words.
    Today my heart cried for you and it was a loud cry.
    Will she hate me when she's older?
    Will I see her before her 18th birthday?
    Does she know I love her?
    My heart cries for you everyday.
    Until I see my daughter, hold her in my arms.
    My heart will cry.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm obsessed with "SoBlessed"... feelin' this this one all the way, poet. :dance1:
     
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    And your words genuinely spoke of that sadness. I felt this flow poet.
     
  4. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    soblessed...so beautiful your name
    so emotional your words...
    flow...so blessed .. flow
     
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    wow that was a deep peice. Very vivrant you could feel the emotion. very gracefull. Touching really...good job
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    soblessed this was deep and to the core
    lovin ya scribe wow !!!!! flow on poetess .
     
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    thanks for the kind words.
     
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