Black Poetry : Untitled

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  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How real is real when real isn’t even real?
    Cause if you think about it even a lie
    Has some truth to it.
    So don’t come at me with this and that
    And how real you think you really are
    Let the realness in you show
    Show me that you are worthy
    Show me the difference between
    Your average *** and a woman of worth

    And don’t come up to me
    Telling me that you can do things
    With your tongue that the average woman
    Can’t even pantheon of
    Please, don’t sell me that lie
    Cause any average woman
    Already knows how to please a man
    She doesn’t need to tell him

    Show me the wisdom that you posses
    Not the egotistical bull **** that you come with
    Me, I will tell you no lies
    From me you get the truth
    Regardless if it hurts or not
    **** most women can’t even handle me
    I don’t mean sexually, I mean is mentally

    Don’t get me wrong, I love sex
    But there is more to me then just that
    I am a man who prides himself
    Who respects himself
    Who really doesn’t mind to show himself
    I can only be me and no one else
    So **** what you heard
    And what you may believe
    I am gonna be me always.

    So please don’t come at me
    With those lies.



    If you can give me an idea for a title then let me know

    Mannie
    HOst and poet of the Verbal High
    www.theverbalhigh.com
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i like dis here ......sound like (twisted truth) or (How real is the truth)
    maybe (I need not your truth)
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are speaking nothing but the truth.
     
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    Come correct or don't come at all, the truth always seems to have a way of coming to light. On point.
     
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    Wow that was deep! I hear you saying..." show me, don't tell me"
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah it is kind of like that. Thanks
     
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    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'd call it "Keepin It Real", that's all most of us want, but like u say some people don't even know what real is and to just be themselves. Another excellent write!
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wisdom you always cool with your comments thanks mami.
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Eye opening this piece puts a real meaning to the phrase "You thought you knew, but you have no idea."
     
  10. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks Soulja, thats whats up
     
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