Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Sep 4, 2001.
wow ! sunshyne
at the cross road of no return baby!
yet confused but love
just flow from within and she be looking
wit a sadly face and he be on a red lie
i love this here
Do da **** thang gurl!! I'm definitely lovin' the work ma! Can I have a box of dem wheaties you been eatin?!
Nah, but seriously sistah -- this piece is
B. Telling the truth
C. Hittin' Home
D. All of the above
GA - you just bat a thousand wit this one! Nice work poetess!!
"S N A P S"
Such a thought provoking piece.....who knows what secrets hide in the running heart ? exceptionally smoove and what questions
you encourage...hmmmm. nice
G-Man. "exceptionally smooth"??... i must've gotten
that from you!! thanks for the read. glad you enjoyed.
Zorbi. T H A N K S!!
N2. i am humbled by your response... why? well...
cause you know you be da ****... dats why!! thank you
for the read & response!!
Shery. your presence is always appreciated... &
more than that... i just need to know what you think!
thanks for stopping by sis!
$$RICHNE$$. i'm glad you continuously seem to
love what i do... it means every thing to me!
You My Dear...
Keep takin the game up a knotch. Take a bow... you've done it again! dont forget me when you blow up k?
WindBeneathMyPoeticWings. i could neva forget cha!
whether i blew up or not... you KNOW that!! thanks for
alla da love!! You're sooooo sweet! (LOL)
some say that it's rays tell all--
how many have heard the sunshyne's rays--
project as beautifully and as heartfeeling as the sunshyne i have come to know?
contin(YOU)e to be YOU.
can't explain how much this has planted seed in my meadows...had to come out for a minute to read again...
excellent as you shyne your rays on my meadow of peace...
i see you up there...
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