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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow ! sunshyne

    at the cross road of no return baby!
    yet confused :confused: but love:heart:
    just flow from within and she be looking
    wit a sadly face:( and he be on a red lie:eek:

    i love this here
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    EX-QUISITE!

    Do da **** thang gurl!! I'm definitely lovin' the work ma! Can I have a box of dem wheaties you been eatin?! :lol:

    Nah, but seriously sistah -- this piece is

    A. Serious

    B. Telling the truth

    C. Hittin' Home

    D. All of the above


    GA - you just bat a thousand wit this one! Nice work poetess!!


    Much :heart:

    N2
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "S N A P S"





    One
     
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    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA !

    Such a thought provoking piece.....who knows what secrets hide in the running heart ? exceptionally smoove and what questions
    you encourage...hmmmm. nice

    peace
    g-man
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    G-Man. "exceptionally smooth"??... i must've gotten
    that from you!! :) thanks for the read. glad you enjoyed.

    Zorbi. T H A N K S!! :)

    N2. i am humbled by your response... why? well...
    cause you know you be da ****... dats why!! :) thank you
    for the read & response!!

    Shery. your presence is always appreciated... &
    more than that... i just need to know what you think! :)
    thanks for stopping by sis!

    $$RICHNE$$. i'm glad you continuously seem to
    love what i do... it means every thing to me! :)
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You My Dear...

    Keep takin the game up a knotch. Take a bow... you've done it again! dont forget me when you blow up k?

    Madd Love
    Reas
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WindBeneathMyPoeticWings. i could neva forget cha!
    whether i blew up or not... you KNOW that!! :) thanks for
    alla da love!! You're sooooo sweet! (LOL)
     
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    well...

    poetic sunshyne...

    some say that it's rays tell all--
    how many have heard the sunshyne's rays--
    project as beautifully and as heartfeeling as the sunshyne i have come to know?

    not one...

    contin(YOU)e to be YOU.

    sean.
    :nuts:
     
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    can't explain how much this has planted seed in my meadows...had to come out for a minute to read again...

    excellent as you shyne your rays on my meadow of peace...:cool:

    i see you up there...:nuts:
     
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