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  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I get high on verbal stigmatizations,
    Conscious thoughts and analytical situations.
    I fin for mental conceptions
    Filled with words full of
    Vital information
    Phrases that can somehow change
    A dying nation

    Yet we still contemplate over
    Vigorous thoughts of emptiness
    That some how control
    Our mental ways of thought
    Bull-**** causes with bull-**** effects.
    Yet, I wonder, and wonder, and wonder
    Why must we
    Endure this pain each day
    The pain of knowing
    That no matter what
    That our way of thinking
    Is killing our being.
    Political change and capital gain
    Filled with racial strain
    A hypocrisy know as democracy

    Yet, I still get high on verbal stigmatizations,
    Conscious thoughts and analytical situation
    And fining for mental conceptions
    Filled with words of vital information
    Searching for phrases that can some how
    Change our dying nation.

    Instead of up lifting
    We spend our time dismissing
    Dismissing the thought of humanity
    We rather talk down on each other
    And clown each other
    Instead of praising each other
    And thanking each other
    Has the thought of righteousness
    Leave us for a hierocracy
    Leaving us with fake *** liars
    And forgetting the high
    The high of a righteous life
    Yet I still plead, and I plead, and I plead
    Cause I want to believe

    That we still get high on verbal stigmatizations,
    Conscious thoughts and analytical situation
    And fining for mental conceptions
    Filled with words of vital information
    Searching for phrases that can some how
    Change our dying nation.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well said and deep to da point
     
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    This was on point, a needed reminder that we so need to uplift each other. I appreciate this flow.
     
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    great poem poet...keep this ish flowin....word

    one love
    khasm
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I will do my best to do that. Thanks for the love.
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is truely what I rather write about. The level of consious pieces are always over shadowed by errotic or sentual pieces.
     
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    wow man wow
     
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    brutha this what we call flooding the front page which is not allowed
    allow your work to move on and not knock poet's with one poem off
    please at the top of the poetry page is a thread for you do visit it
    thankz in advance
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