Black Poetry : Untitled

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  1. lahla

    lahla Member MEMBER

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    COULD IT REALLY BE WHAT I SAID?
    COULD IT REALLY BE WHAT I DID?
    WHAT DID I SAY HUNH.. WHAT?
    I CAN'T RECALL EVER DOING ANYTHING TO HURT YOU....DID I?
    COULD IT REALLY BE WHAT I DIDN'T DO?..
    DID I LACK SOMETHING THAT YOU NEEDED?
    LOVE, TIME, SPACE?
    SPACE...SPACE...SPACE...
    WAS I CROWDING YOUR SPACE?
    DID YOU NEED SPACE?.. YOUR SPACE?
    WAS IT REALLY ME?...
    COULD IT REALLY BE ME?
    UHMMMMMMMH.......
    I KNOW THAT I AM VERY MYSTICAL AT TIMES
    OVER ANALYTICAL BUT, THIS I JUST CAN'T SEEM TO ANALYZE. I DONT' KNOW WHAT TO THINK FIRST. COULD YOU HAVE FOUND SOMEONE TO TK E THE PLACE OF ME?.. YOUR ME!.. ME! THE ONE WHO LOVED YOU WHEN YOU NEEDED LOVE. THE ONE WHO LISTENED WHEN YOU WANTEDTO TALK. THE ONE WHO TALKED EVEN WHEN YOU DIDN'T LISTEN. ME!.. I GAVE YOU MY SOUL. WHAT WAS IT THAT YOU DISLIKED IN ME. I THOUGHT YOU NEEDED ME. ME!... I... I THOUGHT THT YOU NEEDED ME. IS WHAT YOU NEEDED TIME?...TIME... YIOU NEED TIME. MY I ASK TO DO WHAT WITH THIS TIME? SURE, IF YIUO NEED TIME, SURE GET TIME,... TAKE TIME..... HAVE TIME.. TIME... USE TIEM... WISELY USE TIME TO ANALYZE WHAT YOU FORBID ME TO. ANALYZE US1... US, YOU AND I. WAS IT ME?... IF AFTER YOU HAVE PROVEN THAT IT WAS ME FIEN!.. I'LL ACCEPT THAT. UNTIL THEN I NEED TIEM.. TIME TO HATE.. TIME TO DISLIKE.. TIME TO CRY... TIME TO BE SAD... TIME TO FEEL NUMB.. TIME TO THINK... TIME TO LOOK... TIME TO FIND.. TIME TO SPEAK... LAUGH DN FEEL GOOD AGAIN. I NEED TIME NOW.. LOTS OF TIME... TIME TO LET YOU GO!






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  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    :wave: went back to read this lahla ... thanks for the smile :wave:
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmmmmmm...

    There is a Time for everything!!
    Tyte scribe here poet!!
    I dig!:)
     
  4. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am glad I took time to read this
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was tyght had me into it like never before .......keep flowin'
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lahla,

    Nice vibe...welcome to the fam!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  7. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tyght !!!

    I could hear you doin this one on the mic so clearly..lovin this drop right here !

    peace
    g-man
     
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