Black Poetry : UntItLeD

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  1. NaeDaTrU1

    NaeDaTrU1 New Member MEMBER

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    Lookin back into my shadows i see
    The person of who used to be
    Not always good, Not always bad
    And neva takin for granted the things i had
    Been thru some ****
    Strugglin times and hard relationships
    People puttin me down sayin i wont make it 'round
    Runnin they mouth but it aint part of my cares
    Not likin how i dress or how i got my hair
    It aint for them , its for me
    Im the one thats gon' make my dream
    Lookin at my future it seems so clear
    Gon' leave them haters wishin they was here
    Everything that happens and Everything that i go through
    Comes thru my poetry..The TRUTH
    So come wit me..
    and experience this journey
    Of Knowin who i am
    and becomin a man
    Flippin thru my words you'll kno tha real me
    JusT Ride the waves of TrU_NaE's Poetry....
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome poet, there is more than enough truth to go around.

    Another shovel in this sandox of love ~
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When it comes down to it, it doesn't matter what anyone says, it's what you actually think of self. Keep taking us down this journey of truth. I was into this piece, flow on, and welcome.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love this truthful scribe of inner beings
    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome from above with love tyte write
    keep the ink flowing poet !
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Powerful testament to rising above, brothah. Flow on, flow on!
     
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    Thank you for sharing this piece.
     
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    very nice scribe...enjoyed this one...Angel
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    haters are a Bummer, aren't they? :playball:
     
  9. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nicely done this piece exemplefies self-actualization in the fullest and it's the greatest thing in the world to know who you truly are.
     
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