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  1. PoeticallybbG

    PoeticallybbG Member MEMBER

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    This is my first time posting any of my poetry... I dont have a title .. I hope you guys can help me with that. Thanks Fam.. I love ya...WRITE ON!!



    I'm lost and I must admit... I don't know where my life is going cause at times I feel like shhhhit, and unlike the scarecrow I don't need a brain... I just need some kind of guidance to show me that my life isn't flooded by rain, sleet, or snow. Lord please show me which way to go cause I'm lost and I know I need a map. Perhaps I've been trapped since birth cautious cause I'm cursed for wearing my emotions on my sleeve. And I wanna leave the nest but im afraid ... afraid of the rocky road ahead and the obstacles in my way.

    But I have to figure this out... I need to know just what to do. Because the only way to get to something is to go through. But it seems like I've been through everything.. so Lord please show me what to do... I'm not questioning you Lord... I just want to know....if my life gets any better before I knock on Heaven's Door.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!!

    first let me welcome u
    for the beautiful poetry
    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of love & peace

    this sound like a title is written within the poem
    (I NEED GUIDANCE)

    well said and laid out i enjoy this welcome u family :great: :spinn:
    :congrats: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
    continue to share and share love to poet's we happy you here
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi PoeticallybbG
    And a very warm welcome to you, this is home...relax and enjoy.

    No need to wait, to knock on "Heaven's door" ...knock now, loud and hard, ....
    And enjoy Heaven right here on earth...it's yours for the asking.
    this is a beautiful piece poet
     
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    justbnme03 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice, ur poem represents so many people including myself, i look forward to reading more from u and welcome.
     
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    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful..alot of people get to this level on earth..I had an experience with it...when someone couldnt wait for life to get better..they went ahead and banged on heaven's door. Thank you for this scribe that appeals to everybody
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well Written. It does get better.
    each day is a new day to live and Love.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Many are on this journey in life, in one way or another. This had a smooth vibe to it. Welcome to destees. I look forward to reading more from you.
     
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    This really touched me....I can see myself in this at different times in my life. And, even now, your words were a well-needed reminder and message for me.

    But, I do hope that you have since gained some direction in yours and some inner peace.







    And :birthday:
     
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