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  1. PoeticAddiction

    PoeticAddiction Member MEMBER

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    As the sounds of Jagged Edge circle my room,
    I'm left to reminisce of that night
    When you crept inside my life
    And captured my innocence
    Placed a protective shadow
    Over my trembling body
    And promised I'd be ok
    Preparing my mind for the point
    When all rational thinking is trapped
    In between the confusion of pleasure and pain
    The moment when I realise I love you
    With everything I have
    And will continue to
    As long as you promise to keep me
    Floating on this cloud
    That has your name engraved in smoke
    Remembering the climax
    When my mind explodes into a thousand emotions
    And gentle mutterings under my now shortened breath
    Of how I want to remember this moment of perfection
    FOREVER...

    So as the sounds of Jagged Edge circle my room
    I'm left to reminisce of that day
    When you crept inside my life
    And stole my heart....
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reminisce... reminisce... recall that bliss!
     
  3. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    ipoetsought said it..
    recall that bliss
    put on that mary j blige...and reminisce
    thanks for sharing...
    and welcome
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the home u found
    welcome to the family of love / peace & respect
    as i bless ya flow show love as u go

    Tyte drop of bliss here look to read more of u
    welcome within poeticly :welldone:
    :hi: :hiya: :spinstar: :new: :spinstar: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The ease of this, is as light as a feather poet. Welcome to destee, hope to hear more from ya!!!!
     
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    I am diggin this! Hey, welcome aboard, poet. Like this flow and hope to read mo! :dance3:
     
  7. PoeticAddiction

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    Thanks for your feedback on this one....it is so much appreciated......Nuff Luv y'all!
     
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