Black Poetry : Untitled

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  1. crimson caramel

    crimson caramel Member MEMBER

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    Stay awhile and entertain my dreams of late
    Your not mine but I held you closer than she
    You and me thus became us and we
    On cloudless climbs you sexed my mind
    I held your gaze and you called all my names
    Burn with with your dark eyes across the room
    Hasten should her eyes meet ours and
    Become ablaze like meteors zoom
    Our openess and conversation more appealing
    than the peeling of clothes
    Loved when we rubbed faces and touched nose
    We exchanged breaths that become one air we shared
    Tasting salty tears sharing our new friendships fears
    I wish we never crossed that line between love and hate
    Because now what my emotions place on my face
    When I see you is hate, like you aint s***
    Love, because my friend hurt me and took us for granted.
    Who was I kidding there is no happy ending .
    2 attractive people, friends, never keeping secrets, agree on the next level.
    One keeps his feeling for his past under wraps,
    Never thinking of the mishaps that await.
    Too late.
    Apology accepted
    Feelings are regreted of what what conceived
    Reveiwing the consequeces not heeding to the past
    Allowed myself to slowly be brainwashed
    and common sence just sat aside and watched my a**.
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love blinds us to so many things, common sense sometimes being one of them. Very emotive piece here, I could almost feel these words. Welcome to Destee.com. Hope you enjoy yourself here.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, this really makes you think. I feel you, and I love the way you brought this. Keep em comin!
     
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    NNQueen going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    It happens to the best of us sis so don't beat up on yourself for allowing yourself to "fall" in love. If love doesn't live there anymore, find the reason, be thankful and move on with your life never travelling that road again.

    Good piece...

    Queenie :spinstar:
     
  5. Pyramid

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    I understand and I am sorry it happened to you.
    Sometimes the lines of love and hate should never be crossed
    And sometimes when they are one is left feeling as you do now.
    Maybe all that can be renewed and revived and go back to what you had before the lines were crossed it seems as though it meant something then.
    Stay strong and keep your head up you never know.
     
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