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plainrhythm

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don't have a title for this, feel free to give suggestions.

tormenting eyes around that
rhythmless spine leave me,
utterly and completly weak;
you are that boom and bip that
the music notes just can't seem to
fit. that's why you're mine.

we have grown into each other's mortal
and have loved to love, as the words we speak
are entirely real, true and blessed.
my eternal valentine with many faces,
don't despair, that's why you're mine.

your aura is the vary one that
soothes the raging waters
into peaceful springs without
even a blink of those icy, coolaid
eyes. That's why you're mine.

the mountains look low in the summer
because they bow down to you,
my brother, your sympathetic brown
skin leaves the message of: you are not
alone, so they listen, and so did i.
that's why i, am still yours.

could i be feeling weak because of his
overpowering stature, nah... i'm weak
because his piercing outline leaves
me melting in the very depths of my
soul.

you play mind games with your many
faces, your many smiles with a different
meaning for each. i read you like a book,
brother and you read me like a single
page... that's why we belong, and always
will, together.
 
plainrhythm said:
you play mind games with your many
faces, your many smiles with a different
meaning for each. i read you like a book,
brother and you read me like a single
page...
that's why we belong, and always
will, together.

I love that stanza...
that just did it for me...
Nice flow...
Sage
 

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