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  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HELLO..... LO..... LO...... Lo
    Hello.....Lo..........Lo..... Lo.....
    Thats the echo of lonliness that haunts my soul
    The reminder of the love lost and the bitterness of a soul turned cold

    Help me.... Help me........... A broken heart cries for relief
    Unguided frustration, swallowed by a world wind of disbelief
    Mental state like a crossword puzzle
    Tears pouring, whining like a dog in a muzzle

    Man you’ve saddle me, crushed my heart
    Leaving me, has left me hopeless,
    Already at the end, but trying to restart

    Can I bring us back, you know combined like
    The words in a sentence
    Cant we make something out of this, the pain is relentless

    The pain is RELENTLESS, and that’s to say the least
    Loves the knight doing the slaying
    And my heart is the beast!

    Gone without reason
    Memories left teasin
    Baby, Baby please, I luv ya, dont change on me like the seasons

    Everything for us was fun under the sun
    Not our conditions are frigid, and you turn and run.

    Unfin LJ
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what a heart felt drop and the reasons to hold on
    surely one will soon see da need flow on THEONE
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Right on for the read,
     
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    :toast: This is such a true and painfully felt drop! :deal:
     
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    i with the rest above this was a painful but tight drop
    i feel this one....
     
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    We always say the words: "It's better to love and lose...than to have never loved at all" ...but try telling that to a broken heart. But I will say this, time do heal all wounds, and love will come again because what's meant to be...will be.
    Wonderful piece, thanks for sharing your heart with us.
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thanks: Thnks alll for the read, :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
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