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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Winds
    .........leaves
    ....combine
    ...2.....create.....
    a noise.........that
    .......subdues......
    the hot colors.....
    of a day.....from
    orange red.........
    to blue....blue green
    ....misty translucent
    you...and I
    lay upon your..........
    ...change / to alter.....
    ...my mood....
    to a mellow drone
    on a deaf
    palette......

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    'N' a trance Blak ... do whatcha' do when ya do whatcha do - again and again and again and .... :wink:


    One :heart:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    BEAUTIFUL

    SPRAY OF COLORS DISPLAYED IN A TRANS~4~MATION
    I LOVE DES HERE .....VERB FLOW HEAD BRUTHA:toast:
     
  4. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And I've come back just in time to feed...

    Keep Verbin' B...

    Peace
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    verb... you made me cuss
    this was so goood!
    sometimes i need it like that.
    -7:spinstar:
     
  6. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Smooth flow poet....very smooooothhhhhh

    *flow-ting*
     
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