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  1. Niko

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    I’m feeling your rhythm
    I’m Diggin’ on your vibe
    Can we hang for just a bit?
    Can I take you for a ride?

    Destination satisfaction
    With many pit stops at lustful intent
    I have a full tank and a love for the vibrating glide
    So we can go where ever your heart's content

    Let’s hit it hard and bust it wide open on the open road
    NO stop signs or no’s just yes pleases and let’s go
    Climb on board and slide your arms tight around my waist
    Do you want to feel the excitement of my downshift, I’ll give you a taste

    We can climb high peeks of pleasure
    Or go down slow in deep cavernous terrain
    Or kick up sand on moonlit beaches
    Or get soaking wet as we fiercely roar through pouring rain


    I can tell you have a need for speed
    And throbbing chrome between your thighs
    So come on now, your wasting time
    Let me take you for a ride...





    (P.S. This was written for my Nubian Queen ~ Can’t keep my mind free from my Nubian Queen dreams, because she was a Nubian Queen long before orchids bloomed in spring…always & 4ever :luvv: )
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful welcome welcome welcome !!!

    indeed a Queen is da essence of beauty & understanding
    tyte drop happy u here to share welcome to destee.com
    welcome to the community of love & unity bond
    welcome within the family poet !
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:

    do hope you consider or decide on a membership here at destee's
    to enjoy all the features & benefits offered as a PREMIUM MEMBER
    supporting a worthy community cause look at what you missing!!!!
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    welcomeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!! :lol:
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I liked the way you used the metaphor of a car in this vibe. This read very smoothly indeed.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

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    this was posed well enjoyed the read....welcome to destee.com
    come join us in chat as well....www.destee.com/chat

    Peace
    Angel
     
  5. nabraska

    nabraska Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome family!!! Very Nice Drop---Well Scribed Poet!!!!

    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:

    :new: :new: :love: :love:
     
  6. Niko

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    Thank you $$Rich$$, Watzinaname, Mzblkangel, and Nabraska!
     
  7. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwwwwwwwwwwww a dedication for your Queen
    nothing sweeter :)
    :read:
    welcome home brotha :wave: :wave:
    Share love and give love to recieve love and hope to see ya in chat with this poetry of yours :)
     
  8. NNQueen

    NNQueen going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    What a beautiful poem and how special it feels to have someone like Niko compose it with me in mind. I can't wait to take that ride!! :)

    Your Nubian Queen :heart:
     
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    Welcome Poet :wave:

    one word...


    Beautiful


    Make yourself at home...
    Sage
     
  10. toylin

    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now this is wonderful! I know you appreciate her, and I hope she appreciates you! Much love to Black love.
     
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