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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THEONE, Aug 24, 2004.

  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im a timebomb ticking and no one would ever know
    Im like a volcano with indigestion, Im about to blow
    Im a nightmare with no ending leaving you terrified, drench in sweat
    Im a gusty storm, with hard rains, leaving you soak and wet
    Im that earthquake measuring 10.0 leaving, shook and unsteady
    Im the surprise that catches you offguard in awe, when your not ready
    Mind bending, spine tingle, Im that, that unusual feeling
    A Whisper.... No a Yell, a Saint but somehow still stealing
    Confused....Baffled.....Naw I got it all together
    Happy.....Sad......In a Rage, unstable emotions like the weather
    Im that brain thats always mulling, and never gets to rest
    Im, Normal, Im Human, But a poet getting things off his chest!
     
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    tight drop..so feeling this one
    flow head on.....release!!!!!
     
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    mmmmmm speak brotha poet SPEAK
    after all isnt that why we are here for each other :)
    so that you can get it ALL out :)
     
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    all I can say is wow...
    I loved the imagery
    in the first half, particularly
    the wind, rain, volcanoes
    and earthquakes...
    I was feeling everything
    you were conveying as a poet...

    Great Flow!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let it be heard whewwwwww! bruh dis was on point !
     
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    i totally feel this flow bro...
    let it go...
    this was solid....
    one love
    khasm
     
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