Black Poetry : untitled

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  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    his mind latched onto mine
    pumpin it wit knowledge
    to continue existence
    he teaches me
    as if i were his only student
    about all life is
    all life could be
    for me
    his heart
    is written are his words
    with bloody letters
    expressin his tru emotions
    he has captured me
    my mind
    the controller of my body
    his presense
    his knowledge, wisdom, and grace
    has changed me
    forvever it will be among me
    linger with in me
    for he has quenched my thirst
    for hope, for faith
    in mankind
    for i have already fallen for him
    b4 i found
    all truths
    b4 i even met him

    if only u could marry someones mental....
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My, wouldn't that be a treasure to behold. that was a very nice scribe...your pen is in full swing...keep me reading.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    relax da soul
    open da heart
    go into a visional
    mass and allow
    da captavation
    to bond and da
    mental join together
    in marriage

    very well done .........
     
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    Sista Daroc,

    You hit it on the head. If you could marry someone's mental,....goodness, wouldn't that be tight?
     
  5. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx for all the love fameleee!!!!!!!
     
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    so tru so tru....
    provocative piece...keep dropin em...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Daroc...

    interesting. Wait until you fall in love with someone's personality. Now that is a trip. :D

    :thanks: for sharing you with us.

    :toast:
     
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    Divine thoughts
    flowing through
    your work here...
    Keep it up, Poet... :toast:
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    or fall for someones talent..
    ....and i tink you can fall for someone mental..
    just at some point...i tink you want a little more...i tink..\

    thanks for the drop
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...There is so much about a person to fall in love with that is not physical. I loved the concept here. Flow on.
     
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