Black Poetry : untitled

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  1. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Unprepared
    I was
    for the beauty my eyes
    were about to feast on
    the crowd split
    much as Moses parted the Red Sea
    and there you stood
    and I as well
    soaking in your essence
    like the sun's rays
    my skin felt warm
    hot even
    and you hadn't even touched me
    "****, that's pretty" I thought
    nothing notty 'bout those dreds
    nothing chapped 'bout those lips
    nothing but rows of white teeth
    straight up, no chaser
    Unlike Stella, you stole my groove
    or did I give it up freely to you?
    Your name, unknown
    but I'll call you TRUE
    every inch of your towering frame
    carved and imported from Mother Africa
    dancing to sexy Caribbean rhythms
    I was lost in you
    as you pulled my hair
    I swear,
    I looked for my parental supervision
    though not too hard
    private dancer was my occupation for the night
    Breakfast and you?
    Mmmm
    Sunlight rising on nubian shoulders
    after passionate, intellectual
    deeper than spiritual
    poetry was made
    this I dedicate to you
    for the moans you pulled from my lips
    so expertly
    as if on a pilgrimage
    to Mecca


    jazzymoonchild, copyright @ October 2002
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whhhhhhhhaaaaattttt.....:eek:hmy: this was so tight poet:)
     
  3. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, Swift!! I appreciate the love. :huh:
     
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    tight drop Jazzy
    likes this....Angel
     
  5. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks, Angel!! :spin:
     
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    :toast: Feeling ya flow sis keeping it moving I see............... :toast:
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know I respect your opinion, thank you Python :toast: :thanks:
     
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    I really like the descriptions you posed here, you were drawn, and you drew us in as well.
     
  9. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    wow i go aaway for a couple of months and come back and discover you..
    fabulous...
    fluid, sensual...you made me see him..and feel you...
    twas nice..
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :) wow! thank you so much deepy! Thank you for the love
     
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