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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ideals yall on a name maybe please.....

    I am not that face on the magazine
    Or that voice in the song
    not that body on the
    tv.....or a story book doll
    I can never compare to that
    Within a minute of the hour
    U cant seem to notice me
    When it comes to my heart..
    You cant truly see
    But I hope within a moment
    of that second.....
    You will open your eyes
    And see…….
    blind unknowing
    what I am capable of
    See……….
    I can love
    i can care
    i can be all you need
    I can be be that one
    who loves whole
    Never judging you
    its a shame for my heart
    is filled with so much love
    and have no one to
    truely share it with
    but if you just look my way....
    you will see....
    But
    It seems I have ran out of time
    And you don’t give a dayum
    So what do I do…
    Monkey see monkey do is not in me
    you cant see me for who I am
    to find or define
    The purpose of me
    its no mystery….
    I am just me..
    Not fake....but true
    the essence of me is peaceful
    and loving...
    stop look see what your
    truely missing
    because i am not a mystery....
    I AM JUST ME.....
     
  2. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    You go Gurl!
    This piece is like that!
    And you already got
    your title too! It's
    right at the end,
    "I Am Just ME!"
    Yeah! that's it!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    being self to the point
    indeed i agree it's on the end
    ya title sits on the end

    ( I AM JUST ME. ) title
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You can only be who you are, it's always good enough to those who matter. This was on point.
     
  5. PoeticallybbG

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    I truely thank you for writing this flow... its like your telling everyone that the storybook.. barbie doll image is just want it is fake and that you have to love a person for who they are on the inside... and if you cant then you got to bounce.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love
    on dis
    well i guess it did have the name
    at the end Purplemoon
    so Rich i gone follow
    your lead since you second it
    "I Am Just ME!"

    thanks watz for the support
    PoeticallybbG welcome within the family thanks.....

    Peace yall
     
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