Black Poetry : UNTITLED

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  1. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey fam! Couldn't think of a title, but I hope u feel me on this.

    See i
    had 2 cut the grass to see the snakes
    and the future Judases who would betray
    and delay
    coming forth the the truth
    cause they lack backbone
    and to be honest
    regardless how they
    say
    they hate me
    i'm all they ever talk about the phone
    gossiping
    insinating
    plotting my downfall
    smiling in my face
    but trying 2 take my crown

    so never mind our lifestyles be
    driving our haters wild
    cause they didn't go in2 something profound
    and they still
    have a mindframe of a child
    got them fazed cause their dreams
    and wishes were never realized
    then left them asking,
    WOULD U LIKE 2 SUPERSIZE
    YR FRIES?
    and they're just so envious
    and mad jealous
    that their rocks don't crystalized
    in da lite
    and they never shine so brite
    so much congrats
    2 me 4 being
    supreme in the hearsay game
    i win
    ha,ha,ha
    u lose
    don't know how this began
    and to think
    u said I was yr best friend
     
  2. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    smh...

    That's a low down dirty shame....
    but time has a way of testin friendship...
    if she aint ya friend now
    she probably never was then
    Nice Piece :heart:
     
  3. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks very much
    4 the love.
    this is very close 2 my heart.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reminds me of this saying, if they're talking about you, they must be thinking about you. Hard to find a true friend, keep your head up. I liked the way you flowed with this.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what a way to see the truth
    most snakes slide low
    frinedship is hard to find now days
     
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    friendship is hard
    to get once you
    get a friend you still
    wonder if they r a true friend
    this was a tight drop
    likes the vibe
    Peace
    :angel1:
     
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    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    MUCH LOVE

    MUCH LOVE ..GIRL U DANGEROUS..AND U KNOW IT CLAP YA HANDS
     
  8. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank u everybody!!!
    Glad y'all feeling me on this.
     
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