Black Poetry : Untitled

[illwillthakid]

Her creative words gracefully grasp my attention
Though her identity wasn't mentioned
My mind still want to listen
Her words were deep
So deep that their meanings were embedded in my thoughts
Affecting my soul
my ears couldn't resist cause they were caught in the strong hold
Her creative mentality
took me out of my reality
& put me in a world were prolific lyrics were the casualty
As she spoke her words wrapped me in captivity
And held me tight, taking away my ability
Her vibes gave me a feeling I have never felt before
& though these feelings were strangers to me
these feelings I adored
My heart soared
As she became the point of my affection
& this was more than a crush
or an infatuation of lust
it was more like obsession
I felt as if I was hers
like those words she enscribed on paper
And I paid attention & spoke to her just to gather her favor
She replied to me in poetry
Which was a language I knew fluently
Being the gifted artist I was acclaimed to be
So, after her presentation
I approached with no hesitation
& after a conversation
It was plan to see
That the strange feeling was her insenuading
how she wanted me

 

[1poetsought]

This subjective piece is a good read.

 

[angelicsage]

two poets attracted within the air of written emotion...
building passion within stanzas and
syllables...there's nothing greater than
being able to communicate in this way...
nice flow poet!

 

[msluciousb]

I am in awe of your eloquence!

You did a fantastic job. And you are so articulate.
I don't remember 16 year olds being so wise...
I am your most honored admirer....Keep up the
flow!

Blessings On Your House!

 

[$$RICH$$]

very very nicely done impressed
happy u flowin so sweet ....keep up the scribe