Black Poetry : Untitled

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  1. Jazz4u

    Jazz4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to scared to release the words that like my conscious
    betrayed my smile and thoughts of maybe today I’ve forgotten
    what it was like to write what I’ve felt because I feel like moving on
    I’ve paid my penance for stealing arrows from cupid
    I’ve learned my lesson
    stolen hearts wept to suddenly and to long for me to just believe that it really is just the rain
    but now
    now I don’t hear the harlot’s screaming down my face anymore
    returning back to the innocence that once thrived in me
    that allowed me to sing in perfect irreverent melodies
    he loves me loves me loves me never not
    I’ve forgotten the reasons why they tried to warn me
    scorned but not scared
    I’m awakening in the
    f
    a
    l
    l
    while infusions of a singular sound echoes from deep beneath the pain of suddenly hitting the floor or wall in the case of you against me also known as your love
    biting at the surface of my audible emotions
    you could only hear me when I wasn’t speaKing to my self-proclaim King
    not realizing that a prince was all you ever thought of being
    I’ve discovered it was
    hollow in it’s shell of a music note that crumbled underneath the weight of trying to
    carry a pitch that hadn’t been tuned
    I... I... I... I... stutter in it’s struggle to be introduced to love that never meet you
    and it hurt that I was sleeping in the daylight believing that it would hurt me more
    to see myself happy with
    out u
    now as I look through my windows your face does not take a place amongst the daily mistaken identities I’ve finally identified your species
    everyone please welcome CupidNevaKnewUbutIdid
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice scribe...
    pen all hot..
    keep flowin..
     
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    I love the way you go to the depths here, Jazz. This is a great scribe.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love the way u displayed this flow nice
     
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    Everyone please join me....

    in presenting the angelicsage "poet of the day" award
    because I absolutely loved the journey that you took me on
    with this piece...I could have kept reading... it was soooo good.
    Exemplary work!....

    Totally Impressed! :glasses:
     
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    wow
    this was lovely
    very nice
    Peace
     
  7. Jazz4u

    Jazz4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel appreciated :grouphug: i haven't written anything new in a couple of months so this is a nice surprise from my peeps to think this is worthy....i love you guys :cry:
     
  8. poeticlyspeakin

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    wow...

    all I can say is WOW...
     
  9. lilcherry76

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    you shocked me,
    took my breath away,
    had me looking to and fro,
    cuz i didn't know what to say.
    u so deep fa real,
    all i can say is keep it coming.
    i use to like jazz--but now i love it,
    see me down the street bobbin' my head cuz i'm hummin........
     
  10. Jazz4u

    Jazz4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks Olakuoto...thanks lilcherry....thanks poeticlyspeakin
     
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