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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You say this time alone it would be good…
    But I found another…who loves me for me..
    Not just because it was something to do…
    See he holds my hand…when I am scared..
    I draw my strength from him…
    He captured my mind..
    Sent my soul in rapture…and
    My heart he holds so dear….
    He is the one I choose…
    Whats for me I will fine…
    But don’t know how to seek for it…
    So I wait in the raptures and he found me..
    He holds my heart like no other…
    The rain have fallen for da last time…
    And my soul have been completed….
    We had are good times…but
    when you think about it….
    in da end it was bad times…
    you made me cry..
    belittled, and yell…
    then when ya said no love lost..
    I knew it was time but didn’t have the
    Courage to leave….now I have the strength
    To go…see in da time you left….
    I grew…..something
    you wouldn’t let me do....

    a blkangel thang:kiss:
     
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    Coming of age, growing pains, larger than life?
    She thinks NOT...

    Wonderful!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very smooth flow what u seek u fine
    in the awareness of ya mind
    free foem the spell dat dewell within
    show u can be what u lone to be
    and seek he his essence of u

    very tyte scribe poetess
     
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    Feelin this, sistah, feelin this. Nice flow.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1poetsought..thanks for your words....hugz

    $$RICH$$..so tru...you always know just what ta say....
    teach me dat...love ya...kisses

    gempis...i am glad you like this one girl...much love thanks for da read....
     
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