Black Poetry : Untitled.

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  1. jenjen

    jenjen New Member MEMBER

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    Hey all... I'm new here... here's a poem to start off.



    Allow my tongue to circulate
    into everything on you that
    does not bare flower-
    ing. I want your song
    in my lap, and petals of
    church stitched like swollen
    threads between my
    thighs-- because heaven
    is there, softened and still,
    waiting for your sins
    to corrupt it.



    Jen
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME!!!
    nice imagery.....i like this alot...
     
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    :wave: welcome...

    :wave:nice flow here :wave:
     
  4. jenjen

    jenjen New Member MEMBER

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    Thanks!! :)
     
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    Welcome to Destee JenJen.. very nice first post.
     
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    WHOA. Very nice way to introduce yourself. I'm looking forward to more.
     
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    Sup jenjen. Diggin ur flow! Welcome :wave: :wave: :D
     
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    Peace.

    Very nice way to introduce self.

    You've got me wanting more.
     
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