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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SayWord, Sep 26, 2003.

  1. SayWord

    SayWord Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Something feels like it's missing
    When it's your lips I'm not kissing
    Sh*t
    I must be tripping
    `Cause my heart feels like it's ripping
    Straight out of my chest
    Somestimes I want you to use me
    Realisticaly
    I understand that's a little unruly
    But I'm not just talking physically
    Let me express my feelings
    I want to do more than all this speaking
    `Cause actions are louder than words
    I wish you were my air
    So I can breathe you in
    Other brothers would try and squeeze you in
    Not knowing time was the only thing you were requesting
    So why not come home to me and let me love you
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahh, the confessions of love
    that spew....without a moments
    thought....so strong, so passionate

    so real....

    like the way u flowed here...
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice piece! Your tag line kinda scary though...Attitude eh?
    Anyway welcome to the Playground...
    Blessings On Your House!
     
  4. SayWord

    SayWord Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love MsL. My tag line is just a part of a Jay-Z song. I'm harmless. I'm a peace lover. :)
     
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