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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A gift of a sister gone unprepared love
    shared that now knows nothing
    but of hate
    Torn down by common lines seeks
    out forgiveness but cant
    find away to bring it forth
    A broken bond that can’t
    be mended a promise
    broken and no words
    to be spoke
    A sisters love past not
    able to restore heads
    down in shame for what
    once was is now destroy
    (c)blackangel
     
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    This is so heartfelt and touching.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u touch hearts wit dis
    i felt it deep within
    wow!
    let the ink continueeeeeeeeeeee!
     
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    thank you guys for taken time out to read and reply.....
    my sister's love meant the world to me but as we spread our wings we went different ways....preaching and praying and she still turn away..one day hopefully soon she will come to her senses and make peace within herself to bring her self back to us
     
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