Black Poetry : ***untitled***

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  1. Kori

    Kori Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Everybody says it when they look at me.
    I'm in love with a man who makes me happy.
    His voice alone carries my mind to forbidden, lustful places.
    I imagine us laughin one minute, and then makin sex faces.
    He shares my love for all things reall, all things tru
    and he supports me in everything that I do.
    Its not hard to love him from far away
    cuz he's on my mind and in my heart with each passing day.
    Morning and night, my love for him grows.
    There isn't a doubt that he already knows
    He lets me know that even though there's a distance our love can stand the test.
    And Im my arms he'll always have a place to rest,
    for i carry my heart upon his words
    i live my life by the melody of birds
    the reminder of us becoming one
    to be together before the day is done
    i have yet to see my love
    yet to hold him within my hands as i do the doves
    but that doesnt effect my heart
    it doesnt have anything to do with how close or how far
    i just imagine our hearts together
    beating as one forever
    distance is persistent as it brings me no worries
    for my life is not in any hurry
    i could wait for days on end
    to see that one i used to call 'friend'
    to be within my arms at last
    so i make kiss him upon the cheek and hear his laugh
    even though i'm blind to the image of the one i now love
    i dont need a face at the moment, because im i still askin how he uses those words as he does.
    my feelings have changed
    they've been rearranged to flow with his words and his name
    for the one i love has no face
    the one i love is in another place
    but it doesnt matter too much
    for i have found the one i love
    and i am willing to wait for days on end
    just to hold him within my arms until our time comes to an end
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so beautiful and well said too keep lovin
     
  3. Kori

    Kori Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you thank you thank you. I appreciate it. This is not one of my favorites that I wrote but Im glad soemone liked it.
     
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    Very beautiful. I hope to find a love like this one day.
     
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    very nice we all hope for a love as this
     
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    yo Kori :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
    this was so lovely :)
    a love dis blessed is so beautiful indeed :)