Black Poetry : untitled

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  1. Truelyblack

    Truelyblack Member MEMBER

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    I dont' have a title, and I did complete it so maybe you guys can help me out. This is my first time posting so please bare with me.

    I have to live for me.
    I can't walk in your expectations,
    an ur every reservation
    maybe we need to have a conversation
    re-evaluating the we in us.

    I mean everything is *** 4 tat.
    I do this so you do that
    I pose a question and give one back!
    We never get our points across, I do
    know that.

    Whats with all the ohhs & woes
    and the empty threats "One Day you'll see"
    u be u and I be me.

    All I want is to leave peacefully
    In unicen
    you and me.....
     
  2. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME :)

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    hey there this was beautiful :)
    i am truly impressed...call it whatever came to your mind when u felt it :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to a family of love & peace
    welcome this sweet lovin flow
    it was very nicely pose'd like a touch of a rose
    name it from ya heart only u can master that
    welcome look to read more of u :)
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  4. Truelyblack

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    thank you !!
    :kiss:
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome :wave: Trulyblack
    wow..enjoy your poem
    wonderful
    looking forward to
    read more
    Peace
     
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