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  1. MORE

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    u walk in the room
    i fall to my knees
    from first time i saw u
    felt this inside
    of me
    ur blood is a blend
    of black and indian
    greekand arabic
    look so good it makes me sick.
    i want to say i love u
    but, i told u once before
    a long time ago
    never said it anymore.
    and i want to leave
    but these chains got
    my legs
    like they had the slaves
    back in the day.

    and i have tried
    to love another
    but come back to you
    cuz there is no other.
     
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    i know i know
    i know someone like that
    she called me last night
    as a matter of fact
    years have past
    and still the longing last
    how come you still want me
    when what you did
    makes me feel empty?

    i really liked that joint...think of a title for that one cause it deserves one

    peace
    khasm
     
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    go ahead girl

    do your thang :toast:

    peace

    pd

    :heart:
     
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    Hmmm, girl I am feeling this. Some men we love can be so very compelling.....as if you would be a willing slave to their magnetism. mmm mmm mmm......the magnetism and passion were so evident in this piece....girl go on and be a love captive!
     
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    That last stanza is my truth. I love it!!

    Serenity...
    Brandi
     
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