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  1. Dee

    Dee Active Member MEMBER

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    I put up a wall
    to protect my already wounded heart
    I didn’t build it alone
    all the men in my past had a part
    It’s keeping out the dawgs
    and yeah some good men too
    I don’t even care though
    I’m doing what I have to do
    I put up a wall
    and that’s why I’m so cold
    Unable to trust or love
    because my fears have taken control
    I’m so unhappy
    and that’s not how I want to be
    I don’t have a choice though
    Who else is going to look out for me?:(
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    from out of flyte
    i beckon to ya call
    true love will caress ya fall
    tears of pain across ya heart
    walls of mask hurt
    open ya heart forth he so be
    the true love awaiting thee
    silent prayer , faith will guide
    ya every direction

    we all fall under dis sadness of life
    but womanly Queen be strong
    life goes on
    so weep not nor hold such pain
    let it out as i whisper ya name
    Dee Dee!
    ya well felt and i know what u feel
    sometime it seem not real
    but life move on
    a real man a true king awaits u
    a vision of heart a soul so true
    this what i see in you
    don't give up or drop ya gaurds
    but remember love not far
    weep not nor feel so blue
    true love awaits u
    keep hope and know ya beauty
    ya inner soul of caress will help u
    sometime we fall under the myth of
    bad relationships
    but love life is a mystery to all
    keep going , trying and soon
    da rainbow of happiness will be in ya grasp
    dis sadness shall and will not last
    trust me !

    we here to comfort u if needed
    we here to asure u this will end
    and here is loving friendz
    sista fear not the heart of love
    remember da man above

    i see happiness coming unto u real soon .....
    bless ya feelings and keep hope
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WALL FLOWERS

    Let them walls, come tumblin' down...
    Come tumbling, tumblin' down-

    1poetsought ~
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When you meet the right person
    day by day, brick by brick
    the wall will begin to fall.

    Allow it to happen slowly
    with time we learn to trust again.


    Thanks for sharing this
    heartfelt piece.

    by the way...
    :wave: Welcome to Destee's



    souldeep!
    Coco
    :heart:
     
  5. Dee

    Dee Active Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ I'm touched, THANK YOU!

    Thank you all for not only reading this, but for taking the time to leave such encouraging words. You all are soooo talented, I've only been here for a couple of days and I'm loving it here! Thanks for making me feel welcome. :kiss:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome sista Dee.....
    we are here for u
    and here on Destee is nothing but love
    do stay and roam the home of many rooms

    word of da wise .......
    welcome aboard the family
    let time take it's place upon ya humble heart
     
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