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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by midnightsson, Mar 23, 2003.

  1. midnightsson

    midnightsson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the name that makes me lose my thought,
    with a magnetic personality that cant be bought
    the situation is twisted and slightly ****ed
    i really like a girl but cant be with her, its just my luck
    i dont know much but know enough to see
    shes the type of woman i always wanted for me
    sense of humor, can cook a decent meal, and smart
    its the kind of girl i wanna create a bond with in my heart
    let nothing tear us apart, but we not even together...
    trying to stay in control but its tougher than leather
    my emotions have a mind of their own, i hate them
    i wish i could kill them off, or even just sedate them
    ignore, destroy and utterly get rid of love, trust, etc. etc.
    id rather be like a robot so my anger will have no competitor
    the only emotion i readily accept but jennifer calms me down
    and from miles and miles away, imagine her in my town...
    i wanna say you're the type id like to get to know better,
    that we could have a strong relationship, even through stormy weather
    but i cant allow that type of weakness to enter my heart
    i built a wall to keep me and trust apart
    but as close friends i hope we survive
    and all the extra feelings ill store inside
    like the way i feel when i see your name
    i just cant trust any1, and that wont change

    Derrick H.
     
  2. LyrikalShe

    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Unrequited love is the pits, huh? I know. I think we've all been there a time or two. But don't close off your heart. Don't be afraid to trust. Take it from someone who did and probably lost the best thing that could have happened to her because of it.

    Serenity...
    Brandi
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt .....indeed open ya heart
    here's where it all start
    let ya emotions flow
    tell her, let her know
    been their times before
    love is a bond strong & new
    don't run or let it make u blue
    do what one must do.....word up!
    well felt
     
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    Poetic Pride Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey now! that was cool...yeah, I agree with Rich open up your heart. Don't hold your feelings inside or deny that feelings for whom you have feelings for exist because they won't go away if they are truly real...open up.
     
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    thanx for the words, but no...i catch feelings to easy so im gonna learn to supress em...thank you though :)
     
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    midnight - i hear you, i have been there...being too vulnerable is no good...but don't be afraid to love because of it.
     
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