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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Reason, Mar 6, 2003.

  1. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A lil freestyle just because...

    Destiny's got us
    caught
    beyond our control
    and it's bonded us
    undeniably
    seemingly tied a knot between
    our souls
    so
    I'll foreva think that you're
    unbelievable
    and
    you'll eternally love
    a man that's
    physically as of yet failed to show
    but's it's gotta end happily
    cause
    destiny's got he
    destiny's got she
    destiny's got we
    Destiny has us
    and it wont let go...

    Can I get a sista that feels this to flow to it please???
     
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    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so true! nice freestyle


    am
     
  3. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome back reason, i missed ya brotha. Where have ya been?

    AM
     
  4. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can't think of anything to add but then it needs no more! Nice write.
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man what a welcome back home ...wit da truth spoken
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice flow Reas. I'm a likin this one.

    Fate has stolen
    and captured
    my heart and now all that
    I see is is you
    You are my one and only
    love
    Now that it's fate
    I've given in to
    You'll forever always be
    my one
    The one I want
    and need
    You are my god
    my entire universe
    The only one for me
    Now fate has made you my world
    I wont let you go
    I'll always be your girl
    Fate has a funny
    way about it....


    *Emma*
     
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    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    brickhead.


    when i read this... i instantly wanted
    to flow! (no lie) but... i was sure i
    wouldn't do it justice. i'm diggin' your
    off the top free flow... keep it comin'. :D

    itsallLove,
    elayne.
     
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    Wow!

    um...wow.... and u freestyle too! beautiful!
     
  9. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful peace....so sweetly laid out..

    Destiny

    Destiny hovered
    over our souls
    long before we were born~
    our love was predetermined
    sprinkled with stardust
    and bathed in the glow
    from a full moon~
    floating
    unclaimed
    waiting for us
    to give it a name~
    falling earthward
    toward our hearts
    and lifting us
    bound for heaven
    toward the freedom
    of you and me being we~
    we are
    a phenomenon
    that was destined
    to be~
    unexplainable
    unpreventable
    undeniable
    full of beauty
    beyond our control~
    a divine power
    joining our hearts/minds/souls
    DESTINY
    another way of saying
    we were meant to be

    K


    and I'm sure I didn't do it justice, but I loved what you had to say...
     
  10. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    real tight meathed


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