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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Miss_EducateU, Nov 26, 2002.

  1. Miss_EducateU

    Miss_EducateU Member MEMBER

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    Look, I can let things go.
    I am letting go of these words.....
    lettin' them out and loose.
    I let him go. I let go of that hate.
    I release into the universe....
    lies and ignorant rumors, benign and malignent tumors
    castration of dignity
    my suicidal tendencies.
    I let him know I had to let him go.
    It was like bodily functions....slow with a slight strain
    and what did I gain? I can open my mouth
    my hands, my heart, and my eyes.
    Now that I know how to let go
    I know how to gain.
     
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    PoeticAlize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it always feels good when you can let go. especially when you re-gain your life. keep doin what you do.
     
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    Miss_EducateU Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Poetic, its a new twist on an old situation.
     
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    YES! this is strength...
     
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    go 'head...
    (that was only dead weight anyway ;) )
    love you!!! :spinstar:
     
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    Doesn't your mind feel lighter,
    releasing all the excess stress?
     
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