Black Poetry : ...untitled...

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  1. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I’d like to picnic on your brow
    to view
    the halcyon images that
    color the canvas brush stroked by your words
    and
    feel for myself if it’s
    sunshine or raindrops that move you
    or both
    your thoughtfulness to consider my feelings
    as you
    create
    leaves me breathless
    so shoeless I remain perched legs crossed in
    anticipation for you to move me
    I refill my glass once again from your well of
    softest Barolo
    and
    sip gently as you’ve taught me while
    absently scooping moonpies from your sky to
    sweeten my senses
    your flow is creating a mindscape for me in
    purest symbolism
    fantastic in it’s tactil-ism
    my tongue slides along the grooves
    dips
    into the crevices and
    dances your new-age waltz
    curling
    and
    rolling in syncopation to your eye’s rhythm
    the colors that you draw only slightly more enticing than
    the slow blink of your
    view finder
    which I follow like a mime in a
    learning state
    as I repeat and repeat your slow syllables in time as
    I believe you’ve prayed I would
    My
    balance leaves me and so like a
    butterfly I float of my own mind’s eye into
    amber glows
    and
    snuggle in my softest naked clothes
    of
    goosedown that perks from my skin
    offered by your need for
    sacred slumber
    sprouts in a show-off of higher understanding
    as you speak
    my colors seem to glow
    freely
    I suppose that it’s been my imaginations quest
    Exposed in techni-splendor
    Erected solely by your art
     
  2. Bishop

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    Ok. Now even I must admit this was off da hook..I almost got carried away with it...but I caught myself....nice piece Lili...
     
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    i am so lovin this brightly painted piece! -7:spinstar:
     
  4. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you both for checkin!! glad ya dig it!! :kiss:
     
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    ok had to read this again......I felt a slight glimmer of the light.....but uhmmm...I forgot my thought.....gotta stop reading your stuff.....
     
  6. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    come over...join us...LOL...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was sweet like candy on trick 0 treat day !
    loved dis piece
     
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    you would like that wouldn't you Lili?
     
  9. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ ~ thanks baby!


    Bishop...lol...
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How bout just...

    ****! Not that I was neglecting this peice but I couldn't quite figure out how to respond to it...lol Slim im diggin ya style... I can't believe this one is being slept on. Dug 'Possibilities', howeva this one added new colorz to the spectrum!

    Uh Huh
    Reas
     
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