Black Poetry : Untitled (Ya'll help me name this)

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  1. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baby, you got me trippin
    simply drippin,
    I’m high
    off your vibe
    and the thought of
    your sweaty skin
    gleaming in the moonlight.

    Your game’s got me
    crazy insane
    the way my name
    dances off the tip
    of your tongue –
    I’m sprung.

    Nasty images
    cloud my vision
    of how good it must be
    to have you freak me
    in the right place.
    I bet you taste
    every bit as good
    as chocolate

    so sweet…
    so addictive…

    You’ve got me
    wanting more before
    I’ve had the first bite.

    I simply adore you.

    Your voice
    makes me giddy
    like a school kid
    Got me grinning
    ear to ear
    at the thought of you
    warming me
    on these oh so cold nights
    cause my covers
    just don’t do me right.

    I’m feenin for a hit
    of your pipe
    to take me where
    I’ve never been
    want to love you
    over and over again
    til my muscles are sore
    and then
    I want to give you more
    cause you even make pain
    feel so **** good.

    I want you more
    than I should…

    I’m obsessed
    with every breath
    you breathe
    I’m so in need of you
    and the high you bring
    but until that day comes
    I have you
    in my wet dreams.

    Baby,
    you do it to me
    in more ways
    than one
    I’m creamin
    when I’m thinkin
    of you
    got me doing
    things I thought
    I’d never do
    but it’s cool
    cause I want to.

    Got to have you
    like I’m under
    your spell
    knowing all to well
    that its wrong
    but it feels so right
    like I’ve known you
    all my life.

    It’s funny
    but it seems
    you were meant
    to be mine
    Hope I can find
    the strength
    to hold out
    cause its no doubt that
    I think…
    I love you.
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my sista

    I feel the rhythm in this serious piece of flo-etry and I must say I dig the way you handled me...mentally...I'm just trynna let it marinate...cause this here is onnn!

    I'm not good with my own titles...so I know I cain't assist you with this....but I do intend to scroll back up this joint and partake once again, if I may

    dayum sis, and thank you!

    a
     
  3. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Danilyn Mami

    I dont believe I can properly verbalize how this hea joynt made a brutha feel...lol

    I gotta let you know that I dig ya style. Like I said before I can see that you're versitile. I love LOVE poetry and this peice hea has definitely captured that JoNeS thang to the fullest!

    I dig whut you do
    Happy New Year
    Reas
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HOW BOUT DIS

    ((MESMERIZED EYEZ OF BLISS))

    but for sho i love the way u paint 2 canvas
    and express self openly .........do ya do sistahQueen:heart: :kiss:
     
  5. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice1

    Since the words and the way you laid it down fo a brotha blew me away there is not much more to say, but "This **** is hot".
    I'm with Rich though on the title. Much love.:heart:
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweet flow. definately FEENIN'! another hot one!!

    keep the flow!!!
     
  7. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Sho Preciate the Luv!!

    Alyce - I think you're a queen. If you love it, it must be good cause your talent is AMAZIN'.

    Rich -
    Like that title. thanks for always encouragin a sista.

    Rashad -
    Glad you like it. Much love to you boo!

    klabarron -
    much love to you brutha! thanks

    Reason -
    I'm sure you can properly verbalize anything you want since you have such a way with words. How about you try and hit me on the flipsyde this time?
     
  8. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i can't think of a title but i could sure use some ice :flamet: :hot:

    tight scribe poet...
     
  9. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    read and re-read...

    sis, i can't think...

    definite
    obsession
    and fiending
    going on...

    i am not a good
    titler either, but i hope that
    help...

    love, madly~
     
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