Black Poetry : Untitled - written for fun

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  1. Legendof_1_Spirit

    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I long to be...
    TRAPPED!

    Lost in the middle of
    your heart
    on the verge of flatlining
    into togetherness
    and ascending beyond
    the words I Love You.

    Let me drown willfully
    in the ocean of your eyes
    that I may see completely
    the wonder that is you
    and discover the essence
    of your soul as you speak
    the words I Miss You.

    Hold me hostage
    in an embrace
    magnetic like the moon
    held in orbit by the Earth
    that refuses to let go
    because each night
    without you is an endless
    nightmare of solitude.

    An all consuming abyss
    of darkness
    where I wander
    alone in a room counting
    the seconds that pass slow
    like snow
    falling on a windless day.
     
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    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...very beautifully written! i love this! and am relating a little too much at this moment:(
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was awesomely created..great flow
     
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