Black Poetry : Untitled (while on the phone with my love)

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  1. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maybe you can tell me why...

    I wake up from dreams of you to thoughts of you/ and those thoughts of you...those thoughts...of you/ well they're all I live for these days/ they subdue my rage/ free my heart from it's cage/ that's held it for much/ much/ too long/ and off key/ and out of range/ i sing love songs/ and smile at all your wrongs/ because to me they're all right/ and/ for you i'm compelled to write/ and for you i'm compelled to write/ and for you...i'm compelled...to...write/ because words are meant to be read and spoken and shared/ and i cared more than enough to not send just the very best/ but MY very best/ eminating from my swollen chest/ wildly contained/ and all for you!!!
     
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    it's all for her !
    this was heart felt
    very openly spoken
     
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    beautiful and captured by you!!!!
     
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    wonderful, put so much heart in it I like this one :) peace and blessins keep flowin
     
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