Black Poetry : Untitled(where ya @ serenti n royal t?)

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  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im not sleepin no more,
    u know longer have me in a trance.

    mad peeps was lovin me n all i could see was u.
    had my vision blurry, so i'd only reach out to u.

    now im awake, walkin thru the snowflakes,
    wonderin y i let u in, knowin that it was a sin
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awaken to da reality facts
    trance be of da dream
    eye wide shut
    i see wit da ray of vision
    to correct da myth

    now i stand wordering why
    it was allowed
    soon my mental cross
    it was a dream !

    nice flow keep droppin'
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx....appreciate it.........ne suggestions 4 a title??
     
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    I'M HERE!!!!!!!

    im not sleepin no more,
    u no longer have me in a trance.

    mad peeps was lovin me n all i could see was u.
    had my vision blurry, so i'd only reach out to u.

    now im awake, walkin thru the snowflakes,
    wonderin y i let u in, knowin that it was a sin





    Letting you was definitely a sin,
    But the way it felt made me grin.

    The peeps that I let pass me by,
    Won't show me love anymore, I wonder why.

    My vision was blurry but I went to lens crafters ya see,
    Got specs for life, Now you're where I used to be.

    Your vision is blurred and your stomach turns at the thought
    That I walked out and left you all the **** that you bought.

    I'm free my dear.
    Free from the fear.

    The fear that I'll be alone without you,
    But that sexy thing there already scooped me up boo.
    I'm ready for round two!
    Are you?
     
  5. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ight ight, im truly lovin the flow :) much love
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    surry ya'll had a long day I'm goin hit ya'll yp wit da end as soon as mind gettin outta restin state :)
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    where ya at serenti???? How much rest ya need, I'm waitin' for the hot ending.
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol @ royal_T..........how u been??...........check out "me".....much love :)
     
  9. blackwizdom

    blackwizdom Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    true... speak on it ....
     
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