Black Poetry : Untitled Vision

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Jul 26, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jan 30, 2001
    Messages:
    1,440
    Likes Received:
    86
    Ratings:
    +86
    Bath and Body Works

    Water drawn hot
    Its steam rising to meet you
    You enter this porcelin dwelling with sensual ease
    Golden brown skin submerged
    Bubbles embrace you
    How I envy their position around your breasts

    So smoothly you sink into the heat of the water
    Only your head is seen
    Sweat on your brow
    Moisture on your lips
    Like me, steam ever rising
    I know the position of your hidden hands
    As the water moves in rhythmic waves
    I know why you smile

    Eyes closed
    Your knees appear
    Spread wide to the edge
    Heat and time have devoured the bubbles
    A soft sponge paints you with wetness
    Oh how you shine
    Glistening from the light of scented candles

    I've not seen many things more beautiful
    You
    Stepping out
    Dripping
    Standing wet and clean before me
    Steam leaving your shoulders
    I smell your cleanliness
    Bathing me in your wonder
    You are so fine

    BE
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jan 29, 2001
    Messages:
    2,922
    Likes Received:
    83
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Counselor
    Location:
    mid-atlantic
    Ratings:
    +85
    Woooooooooo

    This one feels soooo good, BE!

    thank you for sharing, Poet

    a
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    yesssssssss!!!! BE.............

    MIDNIGHT LOVE
    TALKING WIT YA QUEEN
    UMMMMMM!! I BETTER GO CALL
    MY LOVE NOW...........THANKZ
     
  4. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jul 16, 2001
    Messages:
    301
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    KC MO
    Ratings:
    +0
    I have to agree, Mr. Beat

    this one felt too good! Excuse me, I need to make a long distance call! :)

    SWT
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 14, 2001
    Messages:
    2,616
    Likes Received:
    4
    Occupation:
    Lover of Words
    Location:
    The PeAcH State
    Ratings:
    +4

    2 words:

    **** BE!!

    SunShyne~
     
  6. Archival

    Archival Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 9, 2001
    Messages:
    67
    Likes Received:
    5
    Location:
    Arizona
    Ratings:
    +5
    No doubt

    Theres very very few things more beautiful then that.
    **** good.

    --Archival
     
  7. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    2,220
    Likes Received:
    3
    Occupation:
    United States Air Force
    Location:
    South Jersey
    Ratings:
    +3
    BE,

    Thanks for the visual bro!!!! Can't beat that!!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
Loading...
Similar Threads - Untitled Vision
  1. Desert Storm
    Replies:
    2
    Views:
    374
  2. $$RICH$$
    Replies:
    2
    Views:
    431
  3. YingYang11
    Replies:
    1
    Views:
    413
  4. asimplepoet
    Replies:
    4
    Views:
    451
  5. Desert Storm
    Replies:
    3
    Views:
    553