Black Poetry : Untitled Vibe

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Words that make
    a soul shutter
    Cause a free flowing
    pen start to spit and sputter
    Take a clearly understandable voice
    and cause it to stammer and stutter
    An aura that enwraps a soul
    and mesmerizes under its spell
    Blankets a body and sets its embers
    ablaze in hushed ways I can't openly tell
    Forces a heart to beat so rapidly, that its
    chamber struggles to contain it within its shell
    Will the words ever personify?
    Will the aura ever solidify?
    Or are some works of art
    destined from the start
    to remain confined to a cage
    deeply felt words imprinted on a page
    that say....I Love You
     
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    Such beauty in your art
    Hiting us with your love and your heart.
    Such knowledge you impart.

    Thanks for sharing...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Godssoulja for your kind response in flow. Much appreciated brotha.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely said under the warmth
    of a soulful love this was sweet
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for letting me know you thought this piece was sweet Rich, appreciated brotha.
     
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    You sure have a way with words, sistah. Wow.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was so kind of you to say gempis, thank you.
     
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    Beautiful Untitled Vibe.

    No title needed, it is love. :flowers:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So very kind of you to say Hodee, thank you brotha.
     
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