Black Poetry : Untitled *to be continued*

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  1. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    With me, it was never about disappointin you,
    It was all about loving and respecting you.....

    But it is funny how 2 different lives,
    become filled with such 'crazy' strife....

    We wanted so much from each other,
    but we changed so much, so why now bother?

    No longer are we the same,
    these days always findin faults in us to blame...

    Always getting the usual: fight on aisle 7,
    but at first, didn't this relationship feel like sweet heaven...

    Now these days, it feels like hell,
    some days feelin like I have fail.......


    *to be continued*
     
  2. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for reading.......
     
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    This was tyte.....but don't let this man baffle your heart you are much to wise for that......This poem sho nuff shows that.......I liked this poem......lookin' for the rest....

    foxy.....
     
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    Very heartfelt....those sad days will get better, really, in time.
     
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    emotions flowin...
    i hear ya.....
    yea cindy sound like a
    clean up on isle 7 lol
    Peace baby girl...
    time heals all wombs....Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling ya scribe and wholeheart it's so felt
    the big change is coming
     
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    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the da love and support..... Just living in the moment for now.......
     
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