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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feeling you
    as I do
    I knew the moment
    you read my love note
    my skin began to warm, and
    your presence proceeded to float
    within
    and without...
    I am not sure how this came about
    but without a doubt
    a part of me is within you
    as you have become a part of me
    How does one even begin to explain
    how it is that we feel each other's pain
    without even trying to
    yet, we do
    And words can't really express
    the aura of tenderness
    when we both feel the love...
    such a burst of sunshine
    on an otherwise cloudy day
    goes beyond anything I can
    think of to say
    But...consider this my own
    miniscule golden ray
    humbly expressed
    as I'm
    Feeling you
    as I do....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feelings from da heart ......da thoughts flow
    sweet drop watz
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, from the heart the thoughts flow. Thank you Rich for your kind words.
     
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    when you feel someone's pain, joy, tears and laughter...
    and they feel your's as well, to me it simply means that, with each other, you have surely moved beyond the physical. It's a spiritual bind that one can truely feel one another....
    Nothing can get closer, or between it...that has got to be a wonderful strange feeling.
    I've been there, you're blessed
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are certainly right, it is a strange, wonderful feeling. That was a beautiful response queent, I appreciate that, as I appreciate you. Thank you sis.
     
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