Black Poetry : Untitled (That's me)!!!

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  1. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I don’t typically write songs, I sing them flat and off key…that’s me
    Sometimes I’m more hip-hop than R&B
    I respect abstract lyrical content and a hot a** beat
    Sometimes jazz is nonsense, if I ain’t feeling jazzy…again, that’s just me
    Hold please, while tweak the tuner on my chi
    Imbalance causes more of a proper balance within me
    You want to feel freedom, you’re free
    I say “indeed,” “yes please” and “f**k wit it”
    I’m as beautiful flawed as they come
    Without judgment I’m a testament
    And monument to this millenniums Renaissance
    I’m claiming it
    I’m a life writer
    I write life onto pages and in the air
    And play life over 3 cord acoustic keystrokes
    And I still choke on my words when the spice
    Is just too spicy for my expectations…
    My soul exists on envelopes, napkins, matchbooks, random pages of the phone book, post-its, my hand, inside book covers, receipts, and anywhere else I can be free. My words take over, but again, that’s just me!
     
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    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    damnnnn u go girl!!! I haven't been to the destee community in a long time but its nice to come back home and know that poets like u have been holdin down the fort the proper way!!! That was tight!:angel1:
     
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    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LMAO...i'm not a gurl mama...i'm a guy (gay), but a guy...lol. Thanks for the love nonetheless. I haven't been here in a long time either...but for me it's probably been years.
     
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    tyte joint and very nice to see u both back in da poetic house
     
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    Really enjoyed the word play, and detailed verse. Wonder how this would sound spoken, or sung? Welcome back.
     
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    Yeah!!!!!! I'm lovin it
    My favorite lines are, "I’m as beautiful flawed as they come
    Without judgment I’m a testament." Now That's Real as a Burn!
     
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