Black Poetry : Untitled Tale Player

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He was 6’4 maybe 6’5
    A smooth talker…
    And I walked on by
    Time and time he would try
    Hey little momma he would holla
    But I would keep on walking
    Like I never heard him call
    I watched from afar
    Knowing I was his star

    The first year
    He had women running him down
    Buying him things
    Waiting on him hand and feet
    I wouldn’t even give him
    …The time of day
    but it didn’t stop him
    He was 6’4 maybe 6’5
    With them bed room eyes
    A man that you knew
    …Would serve you right
    But he was
    Just another hustler in the streets
    Selling his boy’s mother a fix
    Dinning with trix
    But wanted to be in my mix
    I couldn’t go there
    Even with the
    Nice car, Nice house, Nice clothes
    2 businesses with a fat money roll
    Promising me the world
    He was…
    A smooth talker he was….
    Didn’t know if
    …… I wanted to say yes or no
    I just walked on by
    As he did that talk

    In his second year
    A wife and 3 women on the side
    He didn't love just wanted to have
    With 5 kids and one maybe
    And I just sat and watched
    He was 6’4 maybe 6’5
    A smooth talker
    With potential
    That knew his game…
    Running untamed
    Couldn’t touch what he wanted
    Dayum he was fine
    In a suit, in shorts or just plain jeans
    I would dream of him
    Wining and dinning me
    Bathing me with his love
    Holding me in his arms
    As we dance all night long
    But he knew….
    To be with me
    Was to come real
    I didn’t want a thrill
    Or a part time man

    That third year
    Got his house in order
    Custody of his kids
    And a divorce
    No more women at his call
    One business to support his own
    And going to college
    To become a man of God
    He heard his call…

    In that fourth year…
    He is 6’4 and still a smooth talker
    No longer a high roller
    I didn’t pass him by

    (c) 2005
    A BlkAngel Thang...
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well sometimes we can spot "Inner Beauty", at it's best. And after so many walk-bys, he did the only thing left to do, to get you ...straighten up.
    nice piece, the flow was good
     
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    Very Nice......it always pays not to settle for less!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome scribe took a few walk bye's
    before both knew it was time to reside
    i like how u did this one.
     
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    very tight piece

    i was feelin dis chic. i definately liked this one. keep doin what you do!!!!
     
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    **** GIRL!!!i was feelin this,even tho u talkin about a guy,i hear that..women be like that too u know!but yea mami,this piece is nice.....luv ya talented scibes mzblack!
     
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    Patience is a virtue my sista...you showed it in this piece..
    I could see him through your poetic description...mmmmh
    took you 4 years to find out he was 6'4' .. i liked that...
     
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    Happy you all enjoyed....sometimes it is best to wait and not take half when you want all....thanks everyone

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    welcome and likewise Angel
     
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