Black Poetry : Untitled (Taken)

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  1. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When taken by the names and the blames of the unwritten
    She comes to the names who are blamed and shaken
    A love of one who tore light
    Love is a strength please reamin in it's sight

    Not knowing where to go, where to turn, or who might
    My love is frantic and reaching for might
    Please take and not be taken
    Take the demons by surprise
    Take them by force and let them feel the right

    Caven men are viscious when it comes to a meal
    But warriors live and die in virtous kill
    Do not touch the annointed for the annointed are touched
    One hand comes down and swoops you with one thrust

    Come in and let us reach
    A stance and a mend
    My love is fighting
    Your love is mine

    Reach from being taken
    I know the heights
    Fellow and Maidens
    From and to new light
    I beg of you now
    FIGHT this Fight
    Before the Taken ... is taken


    PLATINUMILLITY1
    OMO ILE ADULAWO NI MI
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    super awesome write sis , i was feeling you here and the end was like melting butter
     
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    This was so moving and powerful, Platinum!

    I felt your passion in this!
     
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    Sister plat I believe you are a genuinely good hearted person by nature...

    a true rare breed.

    :read: :)
    I dont get to read you often sister so this was nice :)
     
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